Help me evaluate my book

Happy At Work BookAlrighty – my book about happiness at work is aaaaaaalmost there. Now I could really use your opinion and feedback.

I’m doing my final write-through this week and I’m incredibly happy with it. Either this is a friggin’ great book or I’m seriously deluded. But why don’t you tell me which it is :o)

UPDATE: I’m totally blown away here, and I think over 40 people giving feedback is probably as many as I can handle, so I’ve closed the sign-up. Thank you to everyone who’s signed up to give feedback. I’m really excited about showing you the book and to hear what you think!

This monday my wonderful girlfriend and I are leaving for a short vacation in London. If you’d like to review this release candidate (nerd humor, I apologize) of the book, write a comment on this post. That way I get your email adress (don’t worry, it won’t appear on the site).

Then we’ll do it like this:

  1. On monday November 6 I’ll email an electronic version of the book to all the people who’ve signed up.
  2. You pick the one chapter that you find the most interesting and read it and give me feedback on it. You’re more than welcome to read the entire thing of course, but focus on one chapter so you can give me some thorough feedback on it.
  3. Forget all about spelling, grammar, typos and punctuation, I’m going to get some pros to fix all of that.
  4. Focus on the contents of one chapter, and please answer the following questions for me:
    • What do you really like about this chapter?
    • What could be better? Are there any holes in the contents or the arguments in the chapter? Something I need to focus more on? Some point I should elaborate more on?
    • Does anything seem redundant? Something I can safely cut out?
    • What is your overall impression? Is this chapter ready to go into the book?
    • If you were to write a three-line review of the book based on what you’ve read, what would it say?
  5. Be honest. If you love it, say so. If you think it sucks, say you love it anyway :o) Just kidding – if you absolutely hate it or see something you don’t like, tell me – I’m a big boy, I can take it.
  6. Write your feedback in the text document I’ll include and mail them back to me no later than friday November 10.

I’ll then do the final rewrite that same weekend and provided that I don’t need to make too many changes, the book will go out to proofreading the monday after and to printing later that week.

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55 responses to “Help me evaluate my book”

  1. Kenny Avatar
    Kenny

    I’ll review a chapter

  2. Kristian Aa Rasmussen Avatar
    Kristian Aa Rasmussen

    Hi Alexander!

    I’d really like to help!

    Kristian

  3. Rich Waters Avatar

    I’ve really enjoyed reading your blog, I’d be happy to take a look at your book!

  4. Joerg Weisner Avatar

    Hi Alex,

    I am looking forward to read and comment on one of the chapters.

    Enjoy London and Europe. I hope you will have good weather over here, because right now it is very very stormy, at least here in northern germany, near the Baltic Sea.

    Best wishes
    J

  5. Zane Safrit Avatar

    I’m in. Love your blog. Thanks.

  6. Dan Avatar
    Dan

    I’ll take on a chapter!

  7. Darrell Avatar
    Darrell

    Count me in!

  8. Tim Avatar
    Tim

    You’ve made a positive impact in my professional life, so any help I can offer would be great! Thank you.

  9. Cowboy_K Avatar
    Cowboy_K

    Count me in

  10. Tim King Avatar

    HI, Alexander. I’ll help, too. -TimK

  11. James Avatar

    Hey Alex,

    I’d really like to help you with this.

    James

  12. Mary Beth Sancomb-Moran Avatar

    I’d be glad to review a chapter!

  13. Matt Avatar

    I would be happy to review your book for you.

  14. Max Leibman Avatar

    I would love to help!

  15. Martin Avatar
    Martin

    Sign me up please!

    Best wishes from Uruguay

  16. Attila Avatar
    Attila

    Hey, I like your blog a lot, and I’d also like join the QA crowd :)

  17. Alok Bhushan Avatar
    Alok Bhushan

    I like your blog, I’d like to help.

  18. Shonnie Lavender Avatar

    I’d be glad to review a chapter of your book Alex. I’ve published two myself–my most important being I Do! I Do! The Marriage Vow Workbook–and know the value of outside objective feedback. I look forward to receiving my copy.

  19. Madeline Avatar
    Madeline

    Love your blog and would love to review.

  20. Civil servant Avatar
    Civil servant

    would love to read & review!

  21. Rodolpho Avatar

    Hi Alex, please count me in!

  22. Vicki Avatar
    Vicki

    I’ll help :)

  23. MyNameIsMatt Avatar
    MyNameIsMatt

    Can’t say I wouldn’t enjoy the chance to review a chapter or the book for you. Sign me up.

  24. sb Avatar
    sb

    I’m very interested in seeing what you’ve written. Tour de force? Delusional? Either way, I’ll let you know.

  25. Anton Dubina Avatar

    Would like to take a look and tell you what I think after that.

  26. Roosevelt Finlayson Avatar
    Roosevelt Finlayson

    Congrats on your steady progress towards completion.
    I would like to recieve a copy of the book to give some feedback.
    I’m not sure if I’m leaving this message in the right place but I know you’ll gey it anyway.Enjoy London !

  27. Christian Avatar

    I’m really looking forward to the book and would be happy to be a part of the review process.

  28. Alfredo Abambres Avatar
    Alfredo Abambres

    I’m here… Mr. FUNtastic of Denmark

    Um abra

  29. yogi Avatar
    yogi

    I’d like to review a chapter !

  30. Nneka Avatar

    Count me in! You have great content on the site. I’m really looking forward to the book.

    Nneka

  31. Sean Avatar

    I’d be more than happy to read a chapter or two. Great content from the blog, looking forward to the book.

  32. Mario Avatar
    Mario

    It will be a greate pleasure to help on the review.

  33. Michael Arnoldus Avatar
    Michael Arnoldus

    Hej Alexander. Efter et fremragende foredrag forrige mandag, skal det v

  34. Mads Avatar

    I would like to help too :-).

  35. Alexander Avatar

    People, people, people :o)

    I announce this last night and just 12 hours later, almost 40 people have signed up to help.

    Thank you SO much all of you. I’m happy and honored!

    This just proves what I’ve always felt: That everything we need is right around us – if we dare to look for it instead of always struggling alone. Thank you!

  36. Philo Bigar Avatar
    Philo Bigar

    Hi Alex,
    I’m looking forward to read your book.

  37. stic Avatar

    I would like to help with one chapter, too!
    Reading your blog for such a long time, places your book in hard position (I have to be better), and I would like to find out if you manage to do it. ;-)

  38. Hilbrand Avatar
    Hilbrand

    Hi Alex,

    I always enjoy reading your blog and I’d like to review a chapter (or two;-)

  39. Pauly Avatar
    Pauly

    Count me in :)

    (you gonna get really BIG feedback as I can see! Nice! :))

  40. Angela Avatar

    Hi Alex,

    I’m looking forward to reading your book and I’d like to help with the reviewing.

  41. Mr Pete Avatar
    Mr Pete

    Would be great to help.

  42. Ashar Voultoiz Avatar
    Ashar Voultoiz

    I would happily read and comment your book

  43. AdventureDad Avatar

    Sorry to show up so late but let me know if you need any help with the book.

    Regards

    Ad

  44. kite Avatar
    kite

    please?

    It will make me very happy to read and comment on a draft chapter.

  45. JACH Avatar
    JACH

    I’d like to review one too!!

  46. Paul Avatar
    Paul

    If I’m not too late… me too!

  47. Nor nav Nenaam Avatar
    Nor nav Nenaam

    My english is not perfect, but I’m curious to read and evuluate the electronic version of the book

  48. Marc Avatar
    Marc

    Count me in.

  49. Simon Haines Avatar
    Simon Haines

    I’d be pleased to evaluate a chapter or more. I work in Human Capital and have been researching happiness at work for the last few years. Look forward to it.

  50. kenpachi Avatar
    kenpachi

    alexander:

    is it possible to summarize your rss into one feed per day or per week? getting 3-4 rss feeds each day is excessive

    ‘just delete it’? maybe … but each time i select a new feed, there’s time wasted if i don’t like the feed … and i’m not happy with my life wasted with such excessive mental load

    a good example is lifehacker:highlights feed where only the ‘good stuff’ happening that week is fed to u — read little summary/abstract and then just select a link to the blog i like

    really, there’s no need to deliver blogs each day with ‘internet instant gratification’ … slow life is happy life ;)

    thx and no offense

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